I already have a proposal for this paper; it does not have a clear main idea. an

I already have a proposal for this paper; it does not have a clear main idea. and i want writer to edit after reading the proposal that professor’s comments.
The one I uploaded the other one have references, and I want the writer to rewrite.
This assignment has two parts: an abstract and an initial bibliogrpahy
Write an approximately 200-word abstract (initial proposal/summary) discussing your initial idea for a photography exhibition or research project on photography. You could investigate a particular photographer, a particular theme, images depicting the same location/ type of event from different historical moments, or some other pressing issue or element of photography. Alternately, you might think about curating an imaginary exhibition. Projects considering archival materials–especially those at UMB are encouraged.
It is OK–even expected–for your project to change.
The abstract/proposal should include the elements below:
1) The research topic you plan to investigate (mention some works you will discuss)
2) an initial thesis that you hope to prove in the paper/ project/ with the exhibition
3) some initial thoughts or findings on the topic
4) a brief summary of possible questions you will address in the final paper/ project/ exhibition
5) a title (that is specific, not generic)
6) how your topic relates to prior scholarship/ exhibitions on the topic you have found or broader trends in scholarship
Include three possible sources for your bibliography as well (cite Chicago style; see https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/717/01/). These should be journal articles, long-form journalism articles, art criticism, interviews with artists, ebooks, books, or museum content. Make sure you can access the resources.