CONTENT: – The rubric asks you to find a picture similar to the OJ Simpson one a

CONTENT: – The rubric asks you to find a picture similar to the OJ Simpson one and perform your analysis. The bulk of your analysis right now is analyzing the OJ Simpson picture, which is not required. It’s okay to make some comparisons between the two pictures, but your focus for this essay should be on the picture of Trayvon Martin.
– It seems like the main ideologies you discuss is racism (perpetuating racial stereotypes) and victim-blaming. Be sure to explicitly list these in your thesis statement in the introduction paragraph.
– I suggest you remove the second paragraph about OJ and use a separate paragraph to discuss the physical characteristics of the Martin picture in more detail.
– Your third paragraph discussing the correlations between skin color and evil is good, perhaps you can apply the lens of that analysis to Martin’s picture instead.
– Your arguments can be clearer if you give some background about the incident surrounding Martin’s death. Is he the victim or is he guilty? How does his guilt/innocence perpetuate the racial stereotypes you discussed in the third paragraph?
– So the structure of your essay should follow as something like such:
o Intro: introduce the topic, thesis statement clearly stating which ideologies the picture represents
o Picture: discuss the visual components of the picture
o Analysis: background of the incident, how the picture perpetuates the ideologies (your current third paragraph), you can make comparisons with OJ pic here but don’t focus on that too much. You can have separate paragraphs for each ideology to analyze them more in-depth.
o Conclusion
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