I have attached my draft with has the instruction on top. I have the questions a

I have attached my draft with has the instruction on top. I have the questions answered in bullet points with paragraphs that I would like to have merged. Please rearrange the paragraphs if it is needed and you help me get rid of redundant materials.
I need to focus on telling a narrative that shows my interest in the department of Epidemiology and why I chose to apply to this school. The word limit is 1000 words.
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Discipline: Epidemiology in Public Health