Hi! I just had a paper written, however, I would like more dialogue added. In ad

Hi! I just had a paper written, however, I would like more dialogue added. In addition, some of the wording is a little over the top, making the story difficult to follow.
Here is the original instructions to the initial paper as well:
Coyote Joe is a collabrative story that will grow and change throughout the semester. Every other day, a designated student will take ownership of Joe. That person will write a chaper (1-2 typed pages) of Joe’s tale. Just about anything can happen to Joe, and you have permission tto do anything to him except destroy him. You have complete control over Joe’s fate. Every other day a student will read an updated chapter on the adventures of Joe. End on a cliff hanger so Joe can be passed on to the next person.