Item 2 of the Portfolio: Annotated Bibliography (due in week 4)
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Include the appropriate heading and title for your paper:
For your final paper, you will need to cite information from four credible sources to help support your discussion. This assignment will get you started finding the first three.
This week, you will submit an annotated bibliography for three (3) of your sources for the final project paper. Two sources should be scholarly (peer-reviewed) and from the APUS Library. Read the instructions for upcoming assignments so you will have a good idea of sources you might need.
Each source (listed in alphabetical order) should have a complete Works Cited or References entry for the citation style you are using, as well as an annotation, which should be a minimum of five sentences long, with approximately three sentences summarizing what the source is about and two sentences explaining how this source will be of use to you in your final paper.
Annotations that are less than five sentences and fail to summarize what the source is about and explain how it will be of use to you in your final project will be considered under-developed and earn lower scores.
Write in third person only and write your annotations entirely in your own words.
To format your Works Cited or References entries, you may use the library cite button discussed in the week four Lessons. Include the article’s web link (the https address—not just the doi) at the end of your Works Cited entry. Just copy and paste it from your web browser, if it is not already included. Examples are shown in the attached Template (which you will download) and Sample (which is attached to show you an example of what a good submission looks like).
Submit your assignment as a Word document attached to the assignment link so it can be automatically processed through Turnitin. Use the template provided. You can save the template with a title like this: Your Name_Annotated Bib.
Due on Feb 2, 2025 11:55 PM
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Sample Annotated Bibliography.docx (21.74 KB)
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Rubric Name: ENGL110 Annotated Bibliography
Criteria
Exemplary
Accomplished
Developing
Beginning
Did not attempt
Criterion Score
Source Selection
40 points
Student chooses two (2) scholarly sources relevant to topic meeting requirements of assignment. Sources come from scholarly journals in the APUS library.
34 points
Student chooses two (2) sources relevant to topic meeting requirements of assignment. One (1) may not come from a scholarly journal in the APUS library.
30 points
Student chooses one (1) source relevant to topic meeting requirements of assignment. One may not come from a scholarly journal in the APUS library.
26 points
Student chooses sources that may not be relevant to topic meeting requirements of assignment. The sources may not come from scholarly journals in the APUS library.
0 points
Student chooses no sources.
Score of Source Selection,/ 40
Source Summary
20 points
Annotations are clear, concise summaries of source materials, demonstrating student has read and understands sources.
17 points
Annotations are summaries of source materials, but may not include key elements and may not demonstrate student’s understanding of source.
15 points
Annotations provide information about source materials, but may not include key elements, may not be clear, and may not demonstrate student’s understanding of source.
13 points
Annotations do not set forth key elements of sources and may not demonstrate student’s understanding of source.
0 points
No annotation
summaries are included.
Score of Source Summary,/ 20
Source Evaluations
20 points
Annotations explain value of sources to the paper; apply to sources clear criteria, such as objectivity, currency, accuracy, reliability, and relevance; and include any issues of concern.
17 points
Annotations explain value of sources to the paper; apply to sources criteria, which may be clear but may raise questions; and may include any issues of concern.
15 points
Annotations do not fully explain value of sources to the paper; base evaluations on criteria which are unclear and/or inconsistent; and may not include any issues of concern.
13 points
Annotations do not explain value sources to the paper; do not base evaluations on stated criteria; and do not include any issues of concern.
0 points
No annotation evaluations are included.
Score of Source Evaluations,/ 20
Formatting
10 points
No errors in formatting rules for citation style of discipline (margins, spacing, font, headers, page numbering, etc).
8.5 points
Two (2) or fewer errors in formatting rules for citation style of discipline (margins, spacing, font, headers, page numbering, etc).
7.5 points
Four (4) errors in formatting rules for citation style of discipline (margins, spacing, font, headers, page numbering, etc).
6.5 points
Five (5) errors in formatting rules for citation style of discipline (margins, spacing, font, headers, page numbering, etc).
0 points
Evidence of efforts to meet formatting rules for citation style of discipline is not seen.
Score of Formatting,/ 10
Grammar / Mechanics
10 points
Annotated bibliography shows evidence of careful proofreading and has two (2) or fewer mechanical, grammatical, punctuation, or spelling errors.
8.5 points
Annotated bibliography shows evidence of some proofreading and has three (3) or more mechanical, grammatical, punctuation, or spelling errors.
7.5 points
Annotated bibliography shows evidence of minimal proofreading and has five (5) or more mechanical, grammatical, punctuation, or spelling errors
6.5 points
Annotated bibliography shows evidence of minimal proofreading and has seven (7) or more mechanical, grammatical, punctuation, or spelling errors.
0 points
Evidence of efforts to proofread and correct mechanical, grammatical, punctuation, or spelling errors is not seen.
Score of Grammar / Mechanics,/ 10
Total
Score of ENGL110 Annotated Bibliography,/ 100
Overall Score
Exemplary
90 points minimum
Accomplished
80 points minimum
Developing
70 points minimum
Beginning
60 points minimum
Did not attempt
0 points minimum
Note: The information in this sample is to help you. Copying and pasting info from this sample into your assignment violates the university’s academic integrity standards and will be flagged as plagiarism.
APUS Student
ENGL110
Professor X
December 5, 2024
Citation Style: APA
Annotated Bibliography
Golden, P. E. (2020). “DoD’s Artificial Intelligence Problem.” The Army Lawyer, (2), 76-85. http://ezproxy.apus.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Ftrade-journals%2Fdods-artificial-intelligence-problem%2Fdocview%2F2408562843%2Fse-2%3Faccountid%3D8289
Some people believe that Artificial Intelligence (AI) will represent humanity’s fourth industrial revolution, and it will drive evolutionary and revolutionary advancement. In 2017 the United States Congress issued a joint resolution called The Fundamentally Understanding the Usability and Realistic Evolution of Artificial Intelligence Act of 2017 (Future Act). This joint resolution focuses on a better understanding of current AI applications, the potential of AI, and its current and how it is expected to impact society. In 2019 the National Defense and Authorization Act tasked the DoD to establish a set of activities within the DoD to coordinate the efforts of the Department to develop, mature and transition AI technologies into operational use. In 2019 a guidepost was released for government, industry, and academia in AI capabilities. It is called the American AI Initiative; five guiding principles are intended to coordinate efforts for AI development. Addressing ethical aspects of AI and ethical transparency in developing and employing AI systems is critical for setting expectations within the DoD.
The information will be used in the final portfolio to discuss the origins of AI, its ethical considerations, sources of funding, AI development and acquisition processes, and workforce reform.
Harari, Yuval Noah. (Sept. 24, 2024). “What Happens When the Bots Compete for Your Love?” The New York Times. https://www.nytimes.com/2024/09/04/opinion/yuval-harari-ai-democracy.html
Harari is a historian and the author of the book Nexus: A Brief History of Information Networks From the Stone Age to AI (2024) from which this essay is adapted. In it, he makes the assertion that the survival of democracy is dependent on reliable information technology, something that is becoming more and more obscured, both in the US and around the world. Today, people are overwhelmed by a glut of information, resulting both in shorter attentions spans and a deluge of toxic information, much of it mis- and disinformation, and more specifically propaganda. Add to this the fact that artificial intelligence is capable of not only producing texts, images and videos, but also conversing with us directly, pretending to be human. Harari argues that these manipulative abilities of AI pose new dangers to our democracy.
This article will be of use to me when writing my final paper since it discusses the dangers and threats posed by AI, both to individuals and collectively to our democracy. Information is power, and understanding how AI works, not just as a tool for humans but as an agent with its own power and volition, will enable us to better prepare for what’s to come in the next phase of the information age.
Liang, W., Tadesse, G. A., Ho, D., Fei-Fei, L., Zaharia, M., Zhang, C., & Zou, J. (2022). “Advances, challenges and opportunities in creating data for trustworthy AI.” Nature Machine Intelligence, 4(8), 669-677. https://www.proquest.com/docview/2928443650/fulltext/C6824ED300DB433BPQ/1?accountid=8289&sourcetype=Scholarly%20Journals
In the last couple of years Artificial Intelligence (AI) has improved greatly and it is only going up. And with the development of AI, AI model building gets easier with automation of machine learning for example. With the increasing ease of model building, creating datasets for AI remains a problem due to the cost of curation and annotation. More attention needs to be placed on developing methods and standards to improve the data for the AI pipeline. Once a dataset is collected, careful selection of a subset of data is used for training so the AI can improve the reliability of the model. Government regulation and data policy will play an important part in promoting, constraining, and shaping data-centric and trustworthy AI.
In the final portfolio, the information will be used to compare model-centric versus data-centric approaches in AI. The portfolio will also cover data design for AI, exploring the process from data design to evaluation. It will discuss the steps involved in handling data after the initial dataset is collected. Finally, the portfolio will examine how data can be leveraged to evaluate and monitor AI models.
Struggling with where to start this assignment? Follow this guide to tackle your assignment easily!
Writing an annotated bibliography for your final paper can seem intimidating, but with the right approach, you can tackle it in manageable steps. This guide will help you organize your thoughts, select credible sources, and write effective annotations.
Step 1: Understand the Assignment
Before you begin, make sure you fully understand the assignment requirements:
- Three Sources: You need to find three credible sources for your annotated bibliography, with at least two of them being scholarly sources (peer-reviewed articles or books) from the APUS Library.
- Annotations: Each source must have an annotation that is at least five sentences long. The annotation should:
- Summarize the source (approximately three sentences).
- Explain how the source will be useful for your final paper (approximately two sentences).
- Formatting: Double-space your bibliography and follow the citation style (APA, MLA, etc.) as instructed.
- Final Submission: Submit the assignment as a Word document through the assignment link.
Step 2: Research Your Topic
For the annotated bibliography, you’ll need to find three credible sources related to your final paper’s topic. To meet the requirements, at least two of your sources must be from scholarly (peer-reviewed) journals available through the APUS Library.
- Tip: Scholarly articles typically have a formal structure and are written by experts in the field. They are often peer-reviewed, which means other experts in the subject have evaluated the research before publication. Non-scholarly sources (like news articles or websites) are not acceptable.
- Use APUS Library: Go to the library’s database to search for relevant academic sources. Utilize Google Scholar or JSTOR to find peer-reviewed articles.
Step 3: Organize Your Sources
Once you have found your three sources, organize them in alphabetical order by the author’s last name. You will then create the Works Cited or References entries for each source in the required citation style (APA or MLA). Ensure that the full citation includes:
- Author(s) name(s)
- Title of the article/book
- Publisher, journal, or website name
- Date of publication
- URL (for online sources)
Step 4: Write Your Annotations
Each annotation must include the following:
- Summary: Provide a brief summary (3-4 sentences) of what the source is about.
- What is the main focus of the source?
- What are the key findings or arguments presented?
- Usefulness to Your Paper: In 1-2 sentences, explain why this source is relevant to your final paper and how you will use it.
- Does it provide essential data, theory, or context for your paper?
- How will it support your argument or perspective?
Example Annotation:
- Golden, P. E. (2020). “DoD’s Artificial Intelligence Problem.” The Army Lawyer, 76-85. http://ezproxy.apus.edu/login?qurl=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.proquest.com%2Ftrade-journals%2Fdods-artificial-intelligence-problem%2Fdocview%2F2408562843%2Fse-2%3Faccountid%3D8289
This article discusses the U.S. Department of Defense’s approach to developing artificial intelligence (AI) technologies, focusing on ethical considerations, funding, and policy development. It explains how AI systems are being integrated into defense strategies and outlines the ethical guidelines meant to steer AI development. The source is useful for my final paper as it provides insight into the governance and ethical issues surrounding AI, which will help me discuss the broader societal implications of AI technologies. The detailed account of regulatory efforts will support my analysis of AI’s potential risks and benefits.
Step 5: Review the Criteria for Each Source
While writing your annotations, make sure to follow the evaluation criteria:
- Objectivity: Is the source unbiased, or does it present a particular perspective?
- Currency: Is the information up-to-date and relevant to current trends or practices in the field?
- Accuracy: Does the source provide factual, reliable information? Are the conclusions based on solid evidence?
- Relevance: How relevant is the source to your research question or the overall topic of your final paper?
You can also highlight any issues of concern you may have noticed while reviewing the source (e.g., gaps in the data or potential biases).
Step 6: Finalize Your Annotated Bibliography
After writing your annotations:
- Proofread: Check for any grammar, spelling, or formatting errors.
- Check Formatting: Ensure that your citations are correctly formatted according to the required style (APA or MLA). Double-check spacing, margins, font, and heading formats.
- Submit: Attach your annotated bibliography as a Word document and submit it through the assignment link by the due date.
Step 7: Avoid Common Mistakes
Here are some common mistakes to avoid:
- Incomplete annotations: Make sure each annotation is at least five sentences long and both summarizes the source and explains its usefulness.
- Using non-scholarly sources: Double-check that at least two of your sources are peer-reviewed journal articles from the APUS Library.
- Incorrect citation formatting: Always adhere to the required citation style. Consult citation guides if needed.
- Underdeveloped annotations: Don’t simply copy and paste the abstract from the source. Write the annotations in your own words.
By following these steps, you’ll have a clear structure for writing your annotated bibliography. Stay organized, focus on the relevance of each source, and maintain attention to detail when formatting and proofreading. You’ll be well on your way to completing this task successfully!