Category: English

Please revise this essay using the teacher feedback I’ve included in the file below. I also included the original instructions on which the first draft was based on. Please reach out with any questions.

Task 1: Hello writer. All I want you to do is to fix the comments my teacher gave me to fix. “Overall Feedback
I am not seeing any references to specifics-place, time, specifics. The assignment is a role playing exercise where these things are important. This is part of my contrast between academic and professional writing. Professional writing is always realistic–focused on the business at hand for a specific dept. Be sure to review the model papers that I posted a few times.” The Comments will be located where the file is called Informal Report Comments”. I will also post the report without the comments so it is easier for you to see.
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Overview:
We have been reading Caitlin Doughty’s From Here to Eternity alongside Joy Harjo’s An American Sunrise as a way to have discussions about power and privilege, culture and community, and access and assimilation. Both authors are absolutely waging an argument- we can use (and have been using!) rhetorical analysis as a way to examine these arguments. This essay is asking you to focus specifically on Doughty, but you are permitted to use Harjo to help support, if it makes sense to do so.

The assigned question:
From the chapter, “Japan,” by Caitlin Doughty’s From Here to Eternity. You will complete a rhetorical analysis of that chapter, explaining the argument that Doughty makes and how she supports in in the text. Keep in mind that a rhetorical analysis is not dependent on your agreement or disagreement with the author.
Requirements:
Word count minimum: 1000 words
MLA format to include in-text citations and a Works Cited page
12-point font, double-spaced, one-inch margins
You will use the Classical Model of organization as discussed in class.
Specific, pointed, and cited use of Doughty’s From Here to Eternity.
Do your own work. This essay does not require external research; confine your essay to our seminar discussions and Doughty’s From Here to Eternity.
Categories for Rhetorical Analysis:

Audience:

Purpose:

Main argument/thesis:

Warrants:

Inartistic proof:

Artistic proofs: pathos, ethos, logos

Language, tone, and semantics:

The prompt is “Based on your careful reading of Neil Gaiman’s Norse Mythology, how do Norse spirituality stories reflect Viking society and values?”
I ask that you don’t worry about including an introduction or conclusion and only do body paragraphs answering the prompt. Also please ONLY USE NEIL GAIMAN’S NORSE MYTHOLOGY AND NO OUTSIDE SOURCES to write the essay.
I’d suggest you use themes like fate (highly encourage this one), bravery, and loyalty, but if you feel you can write about something else and tie both the Norse stories and the Norse culture to each other another way, by all means do so. I also ask that you use some in text citations. I’d also suggest you use two to three different stories from Norse Mythology to answer the prompt. Thank you for all your help! Let me know if you need any clarification or have any questions.

Topic one: front the book place to stand by jimmy baca satiago. Write a two to three page paragraph MEAL easy. About racism, poverty and self-esteem. Pick a quotation from the book or a paragraph from the book and site the page or paragraph you picked from. Using 12 Roman point and double spacing in an MLA format. Don’t forget to number your page and add your last name on the header.
Second topic. This time. You would be writing on the topic: In what ways is jimmy silenced and why? Through what means does he begin to have a voice. Only one the first assignment that have just the MEAL. This time you are writing an introduction, MEAL and conclusion on the above topic. Using the same MLA format and double spacing as topic 1. You can make this 3 to 5 pages. Attached is the ebook to read from, and note from the professor on the second topic of the assignment. Don’t forget to create space for my name, school, professor name, and date. Let me know if you need more details. And both of them is due on Monday.

Congratulations on the work you completed for your Course Project. The next step is to create a Course Project Report for senior leadership, because they want to understand your efforts, especially as it relates to the organization’s overall strategy. When completing each of the following sections, assume you have completed the project and project deliverable. The deliverable is worth 100 points.
The main focus of the report is to incorporate the project assignments you completed into a comprehensive document. In addition to the sections that discuss work you completed in previous weeks, there are additional sections that require your reflection and project management expertise.

Each of us have patterns of communication in our families.Open the document below and follow the directions.
Choose one of your parents and respond to the questionnaire with that parent in mind. After completing the questionnaire, calculate your family’s communication patterns and respond to the reflection questions. Follow the directions carefully. Post your essay and your completed family form to this Assignment area!!

I will write all of the instructions here as well as include pictures of them as well.
– For this essay, you will discuss how the author’s use of a specific literary device (or devices) functions to convey a theme within that text. Keep in mind: Your thesis statement defines for the reader the content of the essay, so be sure your thesis is a strong, concise argument. The content of your essay will provide evidence to support that thesis through strong, well-developed body paragraphs.
-The short story you will write this essay about is called “The Perfect Match” by Ken Liu. I will include the story attached as well.
– I have attached 2 discussion papers where I analyzed the short story and answered some main questions, you should use these papers to help write this essay. One of the discussion papers includes my thesis but I will write it here as well.
– The thesis for this essay is: In “The Perfect Match”, Ken Liu uses a dystopian setting to criticize the over-reliance that society has on technology by highlighting how the illusion of convenience can rob people of their individuality and reinforce systems of control.
– The literary devices you will write about in this story are symbolism and irony. In the paper I provide titled “A Perfect Illusion: “The Perfect Match”, there is a whole paragraph about where irony and symbolism take place in the story.
– The theme of this story is dystopia, and you will find more information about how that theme connects to the story in the second paper I provided which is titled “The Illusion of Freedom: Technological Control and the Dystopian World”.
– Make sure to use a lot of quotes from the story/explain your quotes
– Format: You are required to use the current MLA style for this essay. This includes proper MLA citation and a correctly-formatted Works Cited page (12-point font, Times New Roman, double spacing, last name and page number in the header on each page, etc.).
– please read thoroughly through all these directions and the pictures of the instructions as well, since there is more information in the pictures that I did not mention in writing
– I have also included a sample essay that you can look at for reference on how to format/write this essay

Now that you have watched Poetry of Witness (link below), write a 300 to 400-word review in response to what you felt was the most interesting piece of information that you learned.

For this writing assignment, you are tasked with composing a rhetorical analysis essay. For the essay, you must choose one of the articles or speeches listed below and determine how the author uses rhetorical techniques to convey his or her message to the audience. Your only source for this essay should be the selected article or speech. MLA documentation and format.