I would like bluebook citation using footnotes. Id. is the proper footnote if ci

I would like bluebook citation using footnotes. Id. is the proper footnote if citing for the same, I need more paraphrasing and making these resources into own words. Find some scholars articles, and integrate them. Here is the professors feedback to this paper : This looks like a good start on this paper. It’s an interesting point that USA is the leader in probationers in addition to the incarcerated.
One general comment for your paper is that it feels sometimes like you are just summarizing sources rather than synthesizing something of your own. For example, you have two pages on history that is all one source (with a lot of id. cites). Similarly, your last three pages on reimagining probation seems like it is a lot of id. cites to a FAQ site. This will be a better paper is (1) you can find some more scholarly sources and (2) integrate them in a way that requires some on your part.
Thanks.