DIRECTIONS: All writers revise and edit their work as part of the writing proces

DIRECTIONS: All writers revise and edit their work as part of the writing process. For Touchstone 3, submit a revised version of your Touchstone 2.2 composition. The process of revising involves “re-thinking” your essay, while editing focuses on changes at the sentence level. Your revision should reflect your attention on the following: Focus Structure Flow Clarity Style Word Choice Sentence Variety As you consider possible revisions and edits, evaluate how your essay can be improved in each of the areas above. Focus your attention on the areas that would benefit most from revising and editing. You can add, delete, or move text as you revise your essay. Note the following revising and editing guidelines: Do not draft a new essay. You must revise and edit your Touchstone 2.2 draft. Depending upon the effectiveness of the 2.2 draft, however, major changes such as refocusing or restructuring may be required. Allow time between drafts so that you can see your original work from a new perspective. Revising and editing are different from proofreading; however, be sure to proofread your revised essay before you submit it. Remember to also answer the reflection questions listed below. B. Reflection Questions DIRECTIONS: Below your assignment, include answers to all of the following reflection questions. How much time did you spend revising and editing your draft? Which revision strategies did you use, and which of them worked best for you? (2-3 sentences) Compare your draft to your revision. How did your essay improve? Provide specific examples of the different revision areas (e.g., structure, focus, clarity, etc.) that you focused on. (3-4 sentences) Think about the entire process of drafting and revising this informative composition. What did you learn about your writing process or yourself as a writer? For example, did any part of the process surprise you or reveal something unexpected? (2-3 sentences)