This is feedback I got from my classmate. My essay is good. I have to make sure

This is feedback I got from my classmate. My essay is good. I have to make sure my audience understands. All you are doing is adding to my essay.
I just need to Revisions for Audience Understanding
To ensure that your audience fully grasitates the implications of your points, it might be helpful to add a section summarizing real-world applications or case studies where teacher assistants have had to navigate these ethical waters. This practical approach can make the ethical concerns more relatable and concrete. Also, consider concluding with a strong call to action or a set of recommendations for how teacher assistants can ethically engage with technology in inclusive classrooms