1. Who are the Caribbean immigrants? It’s confusing because you are mentioning “

1. Who are the Caribbean immigrants? It’s confusing because you are mentioning “two groups”.
2. “insignificant” ? Do you mean to say that they were deemed or considered insignificant?
3. “status, which entails being” can be replaced by of
4. Rephrase this please; it’s not clear: ” The protests did not yield much as the Haitian detainees faced the issue of high temperatures and rains as they lived in tents and also the spread of infections such as AIDS ”
5. The debate in the popular press on WHETHER THE Haitian refugees WERE ECONOMIC….