I need my paper to be edited and re-written in a few places. I attached a copy o

I need my paper to be edited and re-written in a few places. I attached a copy of my paper with the annotations on pages 2 and 6.
Here is a list of what I need you to do:
1) The first annotation that says, “You need to choose one and be explicit about what you are focused on”—-please insert/replace at the end of the sentence “….cultural identities concerning trauma and health.”
2) The second annotation, please lowercase Indigenous to indigenous
3) The third annotation—please extend this paragraph to 3 or 4 sentences.
4) Please include additional writing in the paper along with my bibliography. You must use all four of the following articles:
a)
https://www.ohs.org/oregon-historical-quarterly/upload/Collins_Broken-Crucible-of-Assimilation_OHQ-Winter-2000.pdf
b)
pages 13-15 from EOH-Analyzing-Primary-Sources_Grades-3-5_March-2023.pdf (ohs.org)
c)

Native Education and Assimilation

d)

Development of Tribal Cultural Identity at the Grand Ronde Indian Reservation

5) Please go to this site and review all of my bibliographies from my paper to edit and ensure all 14 citations are correctly formatted to the Chicago author/date method.
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/chicago_manual_17th_edition/cmos_formatting_and_style_guide/cmos_author_date_sample_paper.html