This is a Health Promotion Paper based off a client that I had to interview. Att

This is a Health Promotion Paper based off a client that I had to interview. Attached is the first draft that I submitted as well as the feedback of what needs to be changed and the breakdown of the rubric where points were deducted. Also attached its the Instruction of the paper and how it was suppose to be written and Interview of the client. Reference the feedback from the professor for what she is looking. If you have any questions feel free to reach out. Thank You!