In the attached mock dissertation, you are suppose to added information to the s

In the attached mock dissertation, you are suppose to added information to the sections that lacking. The lacking sections received a score of 0 or 1 in the charts on pages 4, 9, and 17. So the charts on page 4, 9, and 17 were scored based on the current information. So please add information to fix those sections and highlight your additions to this mock dissertation. The goal is to add sufficient information that would increase the reviewer’s score to at least a 2.