I get this reply from my professor regarding my research paper draft Professor

I get this reply from my professor regarding my research paper draft
Professor feedback (Voice Comment)
You have submitted 7 pages, with touching on each category minimally, and the information you provided so far does need explanations.
So, I need you to focus on expanding your works to include more of your opinion, and what you think should happen if you are executive director of SDCE (For example your strategic analysis you said that their priority to fortify financial sustainability, how should that look ??)
So, Again, everything you started its look good, go on, but you need to look on doubling and tripling what you done to include what you think are the important elements of the successful nonprofit for the education sector.
Iam sure you know that, but I need to make sure that you know I see that, what you have started is good, we got 3 references, you want to aim like probably more than 20 references
Let me know if you have any questions
And again, thanks for your work This what i get for my paper draft which i did for the course
Strategic Leadership and Management in Nonprofit Organizations: Theory and Practice 2nd ed.
Golensky & Hagar
Oxford University Press 2021
ISBN-13: 978-0190097844
And my paper talking about
https://sdcce.edu/
which she request me to do it by this way
This is where you get a chance to put your ideas together in a form of a draft. The most important aspect of writing a paper is to have a clear flow of material that sets the basis for your final paper. This exercise is worth 70 points. You should use the following guideline that is designed to give you a clear picture of what is expected from you. If you compose a half page draft with one reference/source for each section you are in good shape. Don’t stress about “perfection” – there is no such thing. Rather, this is a working document to make sure you are on track and I can “see” that you are on track with the foundation for your final project topics.
Introduction and sections 80%
Mission statement and analysis
Annual Report and analysis
Staff and Board roster and analysis
Technology inventory and analysis
Current fiscal year budget analysis
Fundraising plan and analysis
Goals, objectives, and activities
An assessment of current resources
A strategic analysis – now what?
Mechanics of writing – 20%
Student APA 7.0 Style compliance 5%,
grammar 5%,
Language, 2%
Flow of the paper 3%
Length of the paper – 5%
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