Please make changes to current paper based on feedback from Professor. Comments:

Please make changes to current paper based on feedback from Professor.
Comments:
You need to take this paper and do some additional work. I got about half-way through the paper, and I have no idea what I am reading. You use a lot of vague terminology so reading further does not help. Moreover, book reviews are traditionally small 3-5 pages. When operating within page constraints forces you to be more specific. Do this over, and let me know when you submit. I will change the grade when you complete the task.