I’ve already written the main part of the short story, can you make it better an

I’ve already written the main part of the short story, can you make it better and longer to about 1000-1200 words. May you help me made the essay sound more fluent and improve the emotion, logic, narrative style, and details especially in the second half of the story where she got into inland, gained people’s trust, attempt the murder, and end up in jail. I also attach the rubric for the story fyi.