Please upload the final draft of Essay One Sunday by 11:59pm Be sure to look at

Please upload the final draft of Essay One Sunday by 11:59pm
Be sure to look at the comments I have been making on the parts of the essay you have turned in to date. These notes and the checklist below will help with the final revision
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1) MLA (in text and work cited)
MLA Formatting a Essay (Check List)Links to an external site.
2) Review the Prompt to make sure you have addressed all requirements
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They Will Be Coming for Us Tonight.docx Download They Will Be Coming for Us Tonight.docx
3) Check the Structure of Introduction/Paragraph/Conclusion
How to Write an Introduction .docxDownload How to Write an Introduction .docx
Body Paragraph Handout.docx Download Body Paragraph Handout.docx
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Conclusion.docxDownload Conclusion.docx
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Rubric
Baldwin/Davis Rubric
Baldwin/Davis Rubric
CriteriaRatingsPts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeIntroduction and Conclusion ParagraphsClear introduction of topic – relevant background – set audience up for the argument
10 ptsAll elements of Introduction and Conclusion Handout Met
5 ptsSome of the Elements of Introduction and Conclusion Handout Met
10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeGrammar and PunctuationCorrect grammar, tense, and well placed punctuation
10 ptsMinimal struggles with Grammar and Punctuation
5 ptsStruggle with Grammar and Punctuation
10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThesis Statement and Topic SentencesThesis Statement: that clearly indicates what the paper will argue and its purpose
Topic Sentences: that indicate what the paragraph will argue and how it connects to the main argument in the thesis
See Thesis/ Topic Sentence Handout for Specifics
10 ptsWell Presented Thesis and Topic Sentence
Clearly indicates the main argument of the paper and topic sentences are clear and detailed
5 ptsStruggle with Clarity of Thesis and Topics
Can see the direction working toward – might be more clear and detailed
10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeMLA FormattingClear use of MLA in Headers/in-text citations/work cited/tense/font/spacing
10 ptsMinimal struggles with MLA formatting
Can clearly see MLA formatting (some minor struggles)
5 ptsStruggle with MLA
Many struggles with MLA
10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeTransitionsClearly transition from topic to topic and evidence to evidence in order to guide the audience through the argument
10 ptsClear and sustained use of transitions
5 ptsSome use of transitions
10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeBody Paragraphs StructureClear use of structure and detailed discussion/analysis
Topic Sentence
Context
Introduction of Evidence
Well placed evidence (early in paragraph)
Unpacking of evidence
Detailed and clear discussion about how the evidence supports the argument in the topic sentence and in the thesis
Transition to new evidence or new topic
50 ptsMajority of paragraphs show clear structure
25 ptsSome/Little Clarity of Structure in Paragraph Structure
50 pts
Total Points: 100