this is the feedback that I received There are multiple errors in this essay. As

this is the feedback that I received
There are multiple errors in this essay. As you resubmit a rewrite, pay attention to the following:
1 You need to capitalize names and the first letter of a word in a new sentence.
2) You need to end one thought with a period before moving on to a new thought in a new sentence.
3) You need to use formal language as you write this academic essay. For example, instead of saying gonna, you would say going to.
4) I should be capitalized when utilized as a pronoun
5) You need to work on your organization of the essay. The ideas should flow clearly and logically as the composition develops. Each paragraph must contain one main idea (with adequate detail to develop that idea clearly and logically) and a connection to the ideas that precede and follow it. Clear transitions should be present between sentences as well as between paragraphs. You should remain focused on one topic throughout the
composition
6) Your exam has too many spelling errors. The errors interfere with comprehension.
Please revise your exam and correct all of the spelling errors. Be sure to run a spell check before you submit an exam
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