Come up with a suitable title, proper thesis statement, and paper should follow

Come up with a suitable title, proper thesis statement, and paper should follow MLA guidelines.
Professors feedback:
This is well written for a first draft. There are a few areas where you need to make some improvemnts:
1. You dont need to add the research question in the paper, rather the paper should have a very strong thesis statement that assers the research question and the hypotehesis and how you arrived there.
2. Also please take into account the MLA formatting guideliens for in-text citations so you know how to do the paper well.
3. Otherwise you make good arguments and they are well supported by evidence from your research