Write a one-page Peer Review of the Case Study below: The initiative that I chos

Write a one-page Peer Review of the Case Study below:
The initiative that I chose for this discussion from the Health People 2030 Framework is “Increase the proportion of adults who get screened for colorectal cancer”. This appealed to me because my mother died of colon cancer, and so did my maternal grandfather. Neither family member had a cancer screen, and both might have lived much longer had they been properly screened and treated early.
Colon cancer is the third most common cancer diagnosis in the U.S. and mostly affects adults and older adults, mainly those 50 and older, but rates are rising in younger people (Healthy People, 2030). According to the Healthy People data, “58.7 percent of adults aged 45 to 75 years received a colorectal cancer screening based on the most recent guidelines in 2021” (Healthy People, 2030). Colon cancer is a common illness and can be treated and cured if caught in the early stages; a colon polyp is typically how colon cancer begins, and it is estimated that it takes about 10 years for a polyp to become a cancer tumor. I’m at high risk for developing colon cancer due to my family history, so I have already had my first colonoscopy and have been trying to lead a healthy lifestyle to try to mitigate my risk.
Kearney-Nunnery states that primary prevention measures are actions taken to avoid illness; for example, a healthy diet or an exercise program (Kearney-Nunnery, 2020). Secondary prevention refers to screening for early detection of a problem (Kearney-Nunnery, 2020). An example of this would be providing patients with educational material about colon cancer. Another would be taking an accurate health history to understand the patients level of risk for cancer and ordering the appropriate tests for screening, such as colonoscopy or a fecal occult stool test.

References
Healthy People 2030. Healthy People.gov. Available at https://health.gov/healthypeople.
Kearney-Nunnery, R. (2020). Advancing your career: Concepts of professional nursing (7th ed.). F. A. Davis.
U. S. Department of Health and Human Services. (n.d.). Healthy People 2030 Framework: The Vision, Mission, and Goals of Healthy People 2030.
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