Hi Writer, I am having difficulty and need help. I have attached my project just

Hi Writer,
I am having difficulty and need help. I have attached my project justification template that has tracking (therefore do not add anything to that particular document).
I have corrections that need to be made: the corrections that I need you to make are the ones dated 10/15/2024 by the professor. Please make sure the data aligns. Please show the changes to the requests that she has made. Rewrite the information that I have that is correct and add your changes but be sure to show me your changes on a word document. Only focus on the following 3 revisions below:
1. Pg.3 -Ensure we work on showing not telling the reader things—show with data/stats and lit on why things are needed(doctoral students only)
2. Pg.3-Avoid colloquial language and passive language: change this sentence to more formal
3. Pg. 8-Be clear
Findings will contribute to educational research by…….(find a citation here doctoral students only)
If you have any questions please ask. Add additional reference/citation needed