The homework is modified according to my feedback. Below are my feedback and new

The homework is modified according to my feedback. Below are my feedback and new requirements. Just help me rewrite them
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Clearly selects specifies the region and topic area, demonstrating thorough research and understanding of the community’s challenges and needs.
Criterion Long Description
Provides a concise and clear one-page summary that effectively outlines the chosen topic area, region, and health issue, demonstrating a thorough understanding of the problem’s context and significance.
Presents 2-3 evidence-based interventions or solutions that are highly relevant, feasible within the chosen region, and supported by thorough data and background.
Adheres to APA formatting guidelines with exceptional clarity, organization, and professionalism
Tailors proposals effectively to the local community audience, demonstrating a clear understanding of their needs and effectively communicating the proposed interventions or solutions.
Demonstrates a deep understanding of global health issues, applies research and analytical skills effectively, and effectively communicates findings to the audience, engaging them in the presentation.For Part 2 of the Global Health Case Study project, you will work in a group of 2-3 individuals (or individually, if preferred) to delve deeper into one of the interventions or solutions identified by one of the group members in Part 1. Your task is to develop a comprehensive rollout plan for the selected intervention, focusing on practical aspects such as community engagement, required resources, and a timeline for implementation. Your proposal should be designed as a visually appealing document, utilizing tools like PowerPoint, Canva, or any other platform that allows for the incorporation of text, images, graphs, and other relevant visuals. The final product should resemble a professional proposal that would be submitted to the community and stakeholders involved. Financial information is not necessary for this assignment.
Your proposal should include the following:
Brief background of your region/area of focus
Brief background of the health concern you are targeting and the prevalence within the community (think needs assessment).
Brief background of your intended intervention
Detailed information about the intervention proposal
Why you chose it over other possible interventions
Pros and cons of your intervention.
How you considered the community in your proposal plan.
Your plan to engage the community moving forward.
Required resources including capacity building, materials, trainings, etc.
Identify what resources are in place.
Identify what resources need to be developed or established.
A brief timeline.
Intended outcomes and research to support why you believe the outcomes will be achieved.
A plan for monitoring and evaluation and sustainability.
Ethical and cultural considerations.
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Rubric
Part 2
Part 2
Criteria Ratings Pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeBackground on region and health issue
10 pts
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0 pts
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10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeIntervention background
10 pts
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0 pts
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10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeReason for choosing intervention
10 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
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10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomePros and cons of your intervention
10 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeCurrent community engagement
5 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
5 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeFuture community engagement
5 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
5 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeRequired resources
5 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
5 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeBrief timeline
5 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
5 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeIntended outcomes and evidence
5 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
5 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeMonitoring and evaluation and sustainability
10 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
10 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeEthical and cultural considerations
Include (1) cultural considerations given the community, (2) your own positionality and (3) the impacts of power, colonialism, etc.
15 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
15 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeGeneral: spelling, formatting, etc.
5 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
5 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeVisual Appeal
5 pts
Full Marks
0 pts
No Marks
5 pts