Please help me revise my personal statement for my SAP Appeal to receive Aid for

Please help me revise my personal statement for my SAP Appeal to receive Aid for the Summer 2024 semester. I failed NURS 202 early into my matriculation at the university due to health issues and being newly diagnosed with another chronic condition during the time of the semester. Flare ups caused stress, anxiety and in result of that I failed the class. I also was concerned about passing the class which clouded my vision. I was orginally denied because i had no mitigating circumstances and would like for my paper to exaggerate a bit to address mitigating circumstances as to why I did not pass. I have also uploaded the letter from my specialist that states what I go through in response to my diagnosis. Please help me.
Submit a personal statement. Attach a statement detailing the circumstances that prevented you from maintaining Satisfactory Academic
Progress. Address all semesters that were not completed successfully and explain the steps you have taken to improve your academic record.
If you are appealing due to failure of the Maximum Timeframe requirement, your statement must outline your timely plan for graduation and
confirm that you will only be working on courses required for program completion.
SAP Appeal Criteria:
Personal physical/mental injury/illness
Death of a relative
Other extenuating circumstances out of the student’s control
Personal statement must address:
What happened?
What has changed?
What are your success strategies and how will this ensure success?