My essay is attached. I need help achieving the feedback stated by the professor

My essay is attached. I need help achieving the feedback stated by the professor, which is the following:
Your draft has some excellent information about the two pets. However, there are several repetitive paragraphs, and most of the specific points of comparison/contrast are not in the thesis statement. Ideally, you should have determined three main points to include in your thesis statement. Your paragraphs often include two or three points, and then some are repeated later in the essay. I recommend working on condensing some of the material so as not to be repetitive. Your citations look good, but be sure you are including a citation for each sentence that is paraphrased from a source. you may be doing that; I cannot tell for sure.