I want a thorough review of my chapter 5 . Because my prof is scolding me if the

I want a thorough review of my chapter 5 . Because my prof is scolding me if the chapter is bad. That’s why I want my document a multiple review with the writer.
1.Review my document is it satisfying the professor comments or not.
2. Check the Grammarly with premium account and check my dissertation is good with in terms of handbook