I had to redo my paper because my teacher said mine lacked structure. This is my

I had to redo my paper because my teacher said mine lacked structure. This is my last assignment
and I need it well done.
Please use the thesis and structure given in the documents, it is a compare-and-contrast essay between Speaking of Courage and Soldiers Home.
Must be 11 paragraphs long, 1 intro, 9 body, and 1 conclusion.