hello there, i have recently just got feedback from my professor , and i noticed

hello there, i have recently just got feedback from my professor , and i noticed alot of small mistakes that needs to be fixed. I dont want to be to hard on you, but what i pay i expect good results, dear. This is the following mistakes.
I need a content page
You need to explain breefly about uniliver in the introductions mentioning that its a public listed company and where its listed and the market size.
you need to introduce your peer company
there is no need for industry average
please recheck the graphs and make sure that what you write relates to the graph for example the operating graph needs to be checked.
no need to write the Source: Unilever (2013:2022) and Nestle (2013:2022) underneath every single graph if its not directing coming from boomberg.
In the ROE graph you mentioned
”The industry ratio of debt to equity is 263.61, which shows that compared to the industry, Unilever had less leverage than the industry. ”
please make sure you put the write information . where did you get 263.61 from and where did you get unilever had less leverage than the industry. please make sure you add detail to where you got the information from
about the micro and micro factors i need subheadings for it
for the unliver share prices where was the increased hand in hand ‘example, from 2013 to 2021, the share price and revenue of Unilever increased hand in hand. However, in 2020, the share price did not increase or increase with revenue that was increased in 2022. when it did infact increase . please look through thr graphs and make sure that the wordings are right.
the share price vs revenue please check the sentences
instead of share price vs net profit change it to share price vs earning share.
firgure 10 did not start in 2020 you’re not taking consideration from what happened before that.
the conclusion ”The evaluation of the financial aspects shows that Unilever’s performance varied in ten years. It was unstable as its profitability, liquidity, and leverage were worse than its rival, Nestle, and the industry. However, its ROE was higher than Nestle’s, but not significantly. The company’s stock price also did not increase or decrease significantly, with an increase in net profit and revenue. On the other hand, the company is a good investment stock because of stable stock prices with a focus on liquidity and profitability. ”
if you;re gonna sure this information at least add where you got the sourse from and reference it, and link it .
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and there is alot of spelling mistakes please go through it and fix them