Summarize and critique  and identify/critique any areas where the author did no

Summarize and critique  and identify/critique any areas where the author did not follow quality research processes, along with providing a suggestion on how the author could have improved the study on
Data Collection/Generation Methods
Data Credibility
Data Analysis
must contain at least two citations with corresponding references. no later than 2019
half of page 
apa format
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