PUTTING IT ALL TOGEATER WITH SOME CHANGES RECOMENDED BY THE PROFRESSOR. I HAVE A

PUTTING IT ALL TOGEATER WITH SOME CHANGES RECOMENDED BY THE PROFRESSOR. I HAVE ALREADY WROTE ALL THE SECTIONS OF THE PAPER NEED TO ADD TRANSITIOANAL SENTENCE BETWEEN EACH SECTION
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