hello. this is an Evaluation of an Argument through Analysis essay. I want you t

hello. this is an Evaluation of an Argument through Analysis
essay. I want you to mainly revise my essay based on the professor’s feedback and rewrite the paragraphs if needed. The professor made annotations on my draft which I already attached. You can see them when you click on the text. I also want you to include quotes with paragraph numbers and page numbers from the articles I provided.