What are the major requirements from the essay assignment that you still need to

What are the major requirements from the essay assignment that you still need to address? As we spoke today I feel like what I need to work on is the intro and my body paragraphs to explain what I’m trying to prove and say oh instead of saying oh yeah I’m talking about this and in the essay. also need to revise and look at it and also need to wait for the students input on what they think about what I did wrong and everything
According to the comments from essay 1 (either rough or final draft), what are some areas of your writing that could use some attention and/or improvement? I haven’t checked what the students have said about what I need to do and correct.
What changes and/or improvements have you decided to make for your final draft of this essay?
What small steps could be taken to improve the essay from today until close to the end of this week? Make a list and assign particular dates.
What challenges do you recognize still exist with this project? What choices will you make to deal with these challenges in a positive and productive manner?
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