the points that needed to be amended in her feedback. However, not all the feed

the points that needed to be amended in her feedback. However, not all the feedback seems to have been addressed in the resubmission. Although I am not supposed to, as it is your first assignment, I have reviewed this in detail to give you some pointers to get to a pass.

Please read the comments carefully and then make the changes necessary. I have concentrated on commenting on what needs amending, which does not mean that the whole assignment is poor- there are obviously some very good parts. However, as a general piece of advice, please try to answer the question in full, apply this to your own organisation and provide sufficient critical analysis that will inform your recommendations.