So I sent you the whole entire study so you get an idea of what this is about. Y

So I sent you the whole entire study so you get an idea of what this is about. You just need to focus on the Introduction, Research question, Literature review, and Rationale. I have changed the font color to red so you know which ones. The teacher left me comments on it so i need it fixed exactly to that and need more new references added into it. The comment left buy the teacher are: “The literature is still mostly descriptive and needs more of an evidence-based “argument” format. You stated there is a gap, but more “comparative evidence” is needed to prove it. Complete this statement: This research is clearly need because xxxx investigations found this, while xxxxx investigations found xxxxx but no studies addressed xxxxxx. Therefore, the objectives of this research are xxxxx [filling the gap].”
Can you please fix it according to this and you can add more of your information on it to make it stronger and add that statement into there. Thank you 🙂