I need to write an argumentative paper for my college class. To get a better und

I need to write an argumentative paper for my college class. To get a better understanding of what the vibe should be please see the attached section from the textbook that has great examples. I have already started the paper and know what I want to write about: Freedom of thought being under attack by tribalism. Personally I think what I wrote is pretty mediocre and needs to be much longer. Fell free to just scrap what I wrote or use it as a stepping stone about what to write. I have attached it called “current paper”. The paper needs to have some real world examples, quotes or connection. Again please see the examples from the textbook. Thank you! Have a Merry Christmas!