strictly follow the rubric that is attached. Based on this rubric, fix up the ex

strictly follow the rubric that is attached.
Based on this rubric, fix up the extended essay part.
Include a 3-4 sentence thesis statement based on the research question in the introduction.
the introduction has to have background information on WW1.
paragraph 2 and 3 should just include knowledge that is relevant to the research question.
in paragraph 4 and 5 is when you should start using the 4 sources provided in my draft, 2 primary sources, and 2 secondary sources that were evaluated. when you use the sources make sure to mention, if its primary or secondary, who the source is by, and a summary of the information included in the source before you start using it and analyzing it. also, try linking up the sources that are being used.