This will be a second draft paper. Here is the feedback my professor left to imp

This will be a second draft paper. Here is the feedback my professor left to improve the paper below.
Good draft! Nice flow of information. Make sure you’re citing adequately. Your paper formatting has some spacing issues that need to be addressed.
General feedback:
Proofread for simple errors/typos.
“Be sure to cite any and every sentence/statement/idea that is not your own or common knowledge.
You must cite at the end of each sentence/idea; not only at the end of paragraph.
Direct quotes require page numbers for in-text citations.”
I also attached the previous first draft y’all wrote that you will need to do the second draft with. I also added the instructions for the second draft from the professor.
Please let me know if you have questions.