This is an editing of an existing paper. Please edit it as per professor’s feedb

This is an editing of an existing paper. Please edit it as per professor’s feedback. I have attaached file with the work + professor’s comments.
The book that I used are . The History and growth of Career and Technical Education in America Fifth Edition Howard R. D. Gordon and Deanna Schultz.
In addiiton, here are initial paper instructions if you find it useful. Thanks.
These are my directions Develop a three to five-page paper that addresses your personal philosophy of career and technical education.
Within the text of the paper, you should define career and technical education and describe what it means to you, compare CTE to general education, describe why it is important in the educational landscape, and present your personal beliefs and attitudes towards CTE, especially as these beliefs impact your students.
Your paper should be properly cited using APA format and use a minimum of three references external to the textbook. This is different than a “personal philosophy of teaching” that you may later submit with a job application but will give you a good place to start for later use.