Review my paper and make the following revisions attached below also make it mor

Review my paper and make the following revisions attached below also make it more argumentative it is currently good but just a little too informal
gotta argue that Artificial intelligience will have an overall negative impact
I have attached the instructions as well please make it more argumentative to prove my point

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