please revise the literature review part, the professor has left the comments， “

please revise the literature review part, the professor has left the comments， “Your Literature Review is written like an annoted bibliography.
You need to “connect” the literature as to tell a story either chronlogically, technologically, and question.
You can use phrases/words like:
Subsequently
Alternatively
In contrast
Moreover
etc.“
I need 0.5 pages and no slides are needed.