I need someone’s help to go through everything i have said in these three sectio

I need someone’s help to go through everything i have said in these three sections.. some of what i have said does not align with the citations i have used (particularly in the first section) a lot of it needs amending. But most of the work and ideas is on the page and ready to be amended please! I have to submit this tomorrow night (UK) time. And i am working on other sections in the meantime, and another assignment, and i just really need some help!
please see the attached file, it includes the instructions and all my work and all the references you need to check it against.
the total amount of words that is actually required is 800, no more than 850. But again, you can rejig what i have done and make it actually coherent and correct against the citations, and touching up here and there and forming it properly – some sections have extended notes attached because i was looking for extra information to strengthen my argument but i hadn’t actually finished it/ incorporated it.
finally, I have not yet given the list of all of the sources, as I stupidly didn’t write a reference list as I was going along! So bare with me and I will provide it within the next hour…