I am just needing slight alterations on this paper that I wrote, summarizing the

I am just needing slight alterations on this paper that I wrote, summarizing the second interview I conducted with my peer. Here is the critique that my professor gave: Overall Feedback
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“You have good info in here, Katy. More important than the info itself, I would edit to be able to discuss how this process worked and what strategies you will use as an educator. From the directions: communication strategies and process, what worked well, what was difficult, what you learned from this process to make a connection and share information through the lens of future educator who will develop professional relationships in the future – so really emphasize and develop your thinking about your conversation. Nice work on this – I know it is a difficult process, and practice will impact your comfort in the future!”
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I only missed one point, so it should be fairly easy to edit. Please use the document I attached. Just really emphasize how well the communication went, and why that communication is so important/helpful for my future teaching career.