Hello, I have anassignment that I worked on but I need help in making it better

Hello,
I have anassignment that I worked on but I need help in making it better in terms of research for data, blue ocean canvas, and conclusion. I have attached both the assignment breif and the paper I worked on so you can make it better please.
Thank you.

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