I need help doing this i am stuck. It is the start of a thesis. Can you take what i did and build one off of it please, if you cant it is OK.
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Here is what i worked on the week before. I also added a file on what i started. if you can keep it about the same if possible, but feel free to change anything
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ffAjaGSMZRPDhmeVnrATlmMMub_RGGza3jbSjbIduRo/edit?usp=sharing
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The assignment info below i also sent a screenshot and sent it as a file
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Use the “Focus thesis and Body Paragraph” packet example to create your topic sentences (A, B, C, D) and thesis statement combining all ideas into 1 statement.
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State topic sentences like the example below:
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A – What Carnegie’s contributions to U.S. manufacturing, personal financial success, and philanthropy were
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B – How Carnegie’s contributions often overshadowed the tense conditions under which his
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workers labored
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C – How Carnegie’s contributions often overshadowed the poor wages his workers received
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D – How Carnegie’s contributions often overshadowed the strained labor relations between him and the workers
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Create a thesis Statement with Key Points (A, B, C, D) Labeled:
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Example:
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Andrew Carnegie’s (A) contributions to U.S. manufacturing, personal financial success, and philanthropy often
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overshadow (B) the tense working conditions, (C) poor wages, and (D) strained labor relations
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between the steel magnate and the people whose hard work enabled him to spend lavishly.
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In planning an essay that develops this thesis, the writer breaks the thesis into sections that
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can be elaborated in individual body paragraphs:
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To earn full credit on this assignment, 1) state each topic sentence (A, B, C, D) for each body paragraph, and 2) combine these topic sentences into 1 thesis statement that will serve as a “road map for your reader” as to what your essay will cover.
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