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draw draft
draw draft in 1000 words
The document I have attached is the final paper document and you have draw draft of this.
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Topic is Sesame Street,
You can write about Sesame Street, but it is not a cartoon. Cartoons are animated, Sesame Street uses puppets.
Using the example of Inside Out does not support your argument here – make sure you are keeping on topic with your specific example. If you cannot stick to Sesame Street, don’t focus on it.
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Your main point is clear, but most of your supporting information is not about Sesame Street, and this concerns me. Your main points should be focused on that show, not cartoons in general. Inside Out is very different from Sesame Street and it will therefore have a very different impact on viewers. Make your argument about the chosen show more clear to strengthen the major paper.
You have consulted some good sources, provided you link them to an argument about Sesame Street.