CRITICAL ESSAY ROUGH DRAFT #2 Using your instructor’s feedback from Rough Draft

CRITICAL ESSAY ROUGH DRAFT #2
Using your instructor’s feedback from Rough Draft #1, your goal this week is to improve your Critical Essay to submit for another round of feedback. Whereas your previous draft may have been built primarily from freewriting, Rough Draft #2 asks you to step up the revision process to submit a fully developed second draft. This time, you will submit your essay to a Tutor.com tutor, which will allow you to get new insight from another reader. Instructions on submitting to Tutor.com are below.
Before you submit your Rough Draft #2, re-visit the required elements of the Critical Essay:
The Introduction: Using the knowledge you have gained through working with the two provided sources, introduce the topic of education to your readers. Provide your readers with background information, and end with a thesis or purpose statement that reveals your connection to the issue.
Body Paragraph 1 (Source Summary 1): This paragraph is a summary of the first provided source. It introduces that source and explains the author’s most important ideas.
Body Paragraph 2 (Source Summary 2): This paragraph is a summary of the second provided source. It introduces that source and explains the author’s most important ideas.
Body Paragraph 3 (Connection/Reflection): This paragraph is where the source’s ideas and your experiences converge. This paragraph is an analysis of what you have researched and an illustration of how this issue connects to your own life and experiences in education.
The Conclusion: The final paragraph will tell your readers what they should take away from your essay. This paragraph will illustrate the significance of the issue, showing your readers why this topic matters.
Format: Check that your Critical Essay is formatted properly using APA (hint: use the provided template in Canvas). This includes:
A title page;
A References page listing full references for your two provided sources (in alphabetical order, double-spaced, with a hanging indent on the second and each additional line of each source);
Additional APA Formatting (double-spaced, Times New Roman 12-point font, indented paragraphs, page numbers).
IMPORTANT: : You will need to submit your tutor’s feedback with the final draft, so be sure to hold onto the feedback once you get it. Your final draft must show changes made from Rough Draft #1 to Rough Draft #2 to the Final Essay. Submitting Rough Draft #2 or the Final Essay with no changes will result in a grade of 0. You may not submit the exact same essay for different grades.
SUBMITTING TO TUTOR.COM:
The Tutor.com link is found on the vertical menu on the left of your Canvas page.
Click on the tutor.com link in the left-hand navigation bar.
Click on “Drop Off Your Work.”
Choose “Writing Review.”
Fill out the pre-session form. It is very important to copy and paste the assignment’s directions (above) into the area where you are asked to describe your assignment and any instructions for it.
Attach your paper.
Click “Submit.”
Upload a screenshot of the confirmation of your assignment submission this week (the copy of the screenshot is your assignment submission). The screenshot MUST include the date that you received the confirmation from Tutor.com. The assignment will not be accepted without the date showing in the screenshot.
Note: Your paper will be returned to you within 12 hours, and you will find your reviewed paper and corresponding documents under “My Account” and “My Sessions” in Tutor.com.
*This is a pass/fail assignment, so be certain you upload the correct screenshot of your submission. For assistance on taking a screenshot, click the appropriate link below.
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