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This is a college essay here is the prompt : MLA format and the prompt for the essay is the letter a I also included the files if you get confused with what I explained.
ApplyTexas Essay Prompts A, B and C For U.S. Freshman and International Freshman Applications For the purposes of this ELA IV class, students will only be allowed to write for Essay A. However, this
PDF gives you the others just so that you are familiar with them. Most universities in Texas require ESSAY A it they in fact require an essay. It you are applying to another university that requires you to write on another topic, you are free to do so, but please let me know before you do so.
Essay A:
Tell us your story. What unique opportunities or challenges have you experienced throughout your high school career that have shaped who you are today ?
You can base the essay around these questions : rewriting Questions
1. What is your strongest personality trait?
2. Does any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish you from everyone else? How did you develop this attribute?
3. How would friends characterize you? What would they say if they were recommending you for a job?
4. Consider your favorite books, movies, works of art etc. Have these influenced your life in a meaningful way? Why are they your favorites?
5. Have you experienced a moment of epiphany, as if you suddenly realize the essence or meaning of something? What was it?
6. Have you ever struggled mightily for something and
succeeded? What was it? What made you successful?
7. Have you ever struggled mightily for something and failed? How did you respond?
8. What was the most difficult time in your life, and why? How did your perspective on life change as a result of the difficulty?
And here are the answers for these questions -I’ve faced a lot of challenges in my life, but I’ve also shown incredible strength and resilience in overcoming them. Growing up in an abusive household was traumatic, but my family and I were able to escape and start a new life. My mom was a real hero in this situation, determined to keep us all safe and provide for us.
Moving to Texas with my aunt was another hurdle, but I was fortunate to find a place to stay at the homeless shelter. My mom’s determination to find a job and save up for a car and apartment is admirable. I have a lot of love and respect for my mother, and I want to help her out as much as I can.
Despite all of these challenges, I’ve been able to stay focused on my education. Being a senior in high school is a big accomplishment, and I’m thinking about college and how I can help my mom. There are resources available to help pay for college, such as scholarships and financial aid. I’m also considering working part-time while I’m in school to help contribute to my family’s finances.
It’s important to take care of myself as well during this time. Dealing with the aftermath of an abusive household and homelessness can be incredibly stressful and traumatic. I’m making sure to take time for myself to relax and do things that make me happy. I’m also considering talking to a therapist or counselor who can help me work through some of these challenges.
I know that I’m not alone in this. There are many people who have faced similar challenges and have gone on to lead successful and fulfilling lives. I’ve shown incredible strength and resilience in overcoming these obstacles, and that is something to be proud of. I’m going to keep pushing forward and remember that I have a bright future ahead of me.
In the meantime, I’m looking for part-time employment opportunities to help my mom and family. There are many options available, such as working at a local grocery store or restaurant. I’m also considering starting a small business or providing services such as tutoring or pet-sitting.
You can base the essay around on this
I would need the Ratiocination – Revising the College Essay If posible on the rough draft
Complete each of the following steps to revise your paper. Bring the next draft, the revised copy of your paper, to class on
We will be peer editing your papers during class that day.
1. Write the first word of each sentence on the back of this sheet. In blue circle the repeated words (3 or more “a, an, or the” for example. Revise for variety the sentences with repeated sentence
openings.
2. In green, underline vivid descriiptive images. In the margin, using your pencil, write the sense that your image appeals to. If there is little descriiption, add more.
3. In orange, underline figurative language like similes and/or metaphors. Identify the kind of figurative language in the margin (S for simile, M for metaphor, P for personification, H for hyperbole, Sym for symbol, etc.) . If you did not use any, consider revising your paper to add at least one. Make sure that they are not “cliché” similes like “black as night”, “clear as a bell”, for example.
4. In red, underline all “be” verbs (“am, is, are, was, were, be, being, been”). If they are auxiliary verbs, leave them. If they are the only verbs in the sentence or clause, revise some of them (if you have 10, try to eliminate at least 5 of the “be” verbs). Use stronger, vivid verbs.
5. In yellow, underline meaningless words like “a lot, very, stuff. Revise the sentences to use more descriiptive language. Change common nouns to more specific nouns.
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Check each sentence. Is each one a complete thought. in purple, underline any sentence fragments, comma splices, and run-ons. Is each thought clearly expressed? If not, revise the sentence to remove all svntax errors.
7. Is your narrative long enough? Is it 500 words min./max. typed, double spaced? If it is too short,
add more. If it is very long, cut some out.
8. Did you use dialogue? If yes, make sure that you correctly punctuated it. Each time you change speakers, you need to begin a new paragraph. If you did not use dialogue, add some. Remember, you can write an internal dialogue the same way as the dialogue between two or more characters in your story.
Did you stay on topic throughout the essay? Answer the college essay prompt/topic completely?
10. Did you share personal experience(s) in your essay? Did you treat your college essay like a
personal narrative is it about vou and what makes vou unique?
11. Did you use a Hook in your introduction (the first sentences of your essay)? (Hooks include using dialogue, beginning with the climax or conflict of the story/personal experience, using a famous quote (either from someone famous or from literature) that relates to the topic of your essay, etc.)
INCLUDING A ROUGH DRAFT PLEASE
ALSO CAN I GET IT BEFORE 11:30 on sep 7 so it can be turned In THANK YOU