Hello, I need a second draft/revision of my first draft essay. I have attached t

Hello,
I need a second draft/revision of my first draft essay. I have attached the readings, link to the video, and my teachers notes. Please let me know if you have any questions
Link to video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?si=chCoCEYs2d-x_uPc&v=NjwJyaSIRqY&feature=youtu.be
Notes from teacher: Good job but I think the paper can more deeply engage with both the film and the article…in the revision use the opportunity to add detailed examples as a place to go further in the analysis

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