Firstly: I need help editing my personal statement to support my family residenc

Firstly: I need help editing my personal statement to support my family residency application. I am a doctor of medicine applying for a residency position and need help to edit, and re-craft my personal statement to convey a stronger message and use the proper English language to strengthen my application. Feel free to edit any sentence or paragraph as long as you make it better. Please, google the requirements for a residency personal statement if unfamiliar. Please, try to keep it very positive and show how well I did with any negative challenge I faced which makes me a good candidate for any program I apply to. Please, see the attached document titled personal statement. Max word count allowed 800.
Secondly: I attached another document that has two questions about the interruption of my education. I also need you to edit them, re-craft and convey positive outcomes to all of the hardships and challenges I faced. This only made me more hungry to continue my education, finish my degree, and now pursue a family medicine residency reaching my dream. Try keeping the word count for the first question under 500 and the second under 400. Use the same format.