Can you edit the according to the comments and redo part of this paper please, i

Can you edit the according to the comments and redo part of this paper please, it is not really organize so could you please redo it in appropriate it way please
and the qualitative method that will be use in this paper is Survey and interview
i will send you the instructors and the example of the Preliminary Research Plan
the document will help you know about how to do it
my topic about Syrian refugee crisis in Turkey and Sweden, but i still not sure what the paper should be about. Also i am not sure what should i wirte about regrading the resettlement if you can help with that as well that will be great
i did the plan but it dos not looks good and i am missing some stuff so if you can help me with that I will be thank full
my main requests is to have the theory and expected findings and how to test the research question
Also, the question of the research some of them are not really great or good to use so if you can look at that as well
so what i need you to look at these carefully:
The comment
and the question of the research question
maybe you need to redo this 4. Preliminary ideas for the theory and expected findings
maybe you need to redo this 5. Preliminary ideas for testing the research question
here just add the Hypotheses(i have some but you can change it or add to them) and add theories (you need to do some because I think this how we will test the research question)
if you need to redo any part please do
you do not need to change the Key literature unless you want to add to them then you can
Also some of the sentences need to be deleted please do that the document that you will be working on called (Preliminary research plan comments)