This draft has been graded based on the completion of the main sections; however

This draft has been graded based on the completion of the main sections; however, there is still significant development needed for this paper to meet final draft expectations. The argument itself is too heavily focused on “what’s good for the consumer” and explaining why sugary drinks are bad–this is not an informative report, and the company already knows the nutritional value of their own drinks–this report needs to be written TO and FOR Coca-Cola, and focused on why this change is necessary from a business point-of-view, not from a consumer point-of-view